As the sun dies down and the light fades to dark,
I sit here with this unknown feeling in my heart
It's the feeling of all the days wonders ending
A feeling so calm it needs no thought or comprehending
Just sitting back watching the world pass by
Staring up at this fading colored sky
The unknown feeling fades with the sun
And prepares to come again when the next day is done
When the day will slowly fade into night
The unknown feeling will come at call of the fading light
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the unknown feeling both comes and leaves with the setting sun??
so it's only there for an instant?
I don't get it. -
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yes it's only there for an instant...it comes and goes with the sunset...it comes when the sun starts to set...and it goes when the sun has finished setting into the sky.
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Very, very nice
Thank you so much for sharing this and for being part of the contest!
All the best to you!!!!
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