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Be Free

I think I feel summer on my hands
As a sky folds warmly
Over a black city lit up.
The streets are drying off,
The sky leaves.
A light wind of nothing,
That will never be felt again,
Dances past me and into the citylife.
The city stands up to the reminder
That we are on fire again.

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  • Jornada
    December 30, 2007
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    Definitely catches the feeling of urban night in the summer.


  • O.o
    December 23, 2007
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    Nice poem. Well written, well structured. Thanks for entering.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 13, 2007
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    Nicely written
    Much enjoyed the read
    Good luck to you in the contest!