The wind has stopped blowing,
There is a silence in the trees
The stars will keep shining
But my heart is put to rest
The candels that burned deep
Within my soul are fading
The hot wax running down my fingers
And the North Wind
Has set a chill to my skin
The feeble lights flicker
In an uncertain future
Yearniong for the warmth of your arms
I no longer find comfort at the hearth
And the garden has long turned
To dead, lifeless rows of emptiness
Mirroring my vacant eyes
Author notes
I dont have an AP family yet so ya... :-)
A contest entry
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Comments
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Hey could i get you to place what you would like to be in your authors box thanks
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i dont really know how to edit this...can someone tell me how to change things like spelling and stuff?
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This is a really sweet poem. It's easy to follow along with... it's enjoyable and I think it's nice. I'm not that good at commenting but yeah. Good luck.
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I think you have a piece that really got your feelings being felt by the reader. Good flow. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Great poem, nicley written, just a few spelling errors, you might want to think about the use of commas and full stops, otherwise the poem seems like one long sentence.
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thanks for entering a couple of mistakes you want to fix cause its important for judging
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wow, this is very good! I love it!!! it's just... full of emotion. I just love it! keep up your amazing work! and best of luck in the contest!
Crimson -
o wow. that is amazing! i love the last three lines, they are so freaking cool! mirroring my vacant eyes...shivers deliciously! LOVE it!
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