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A Wakening


Ah, what dreams,
what prayers and
memories of songs
we whisper
into the night
between the pillow
and the dawn;

to see, to feel,
embrace, the very breath
of God.

Dreams,
(I’ve heard)
are merely
whispering echoes of the heart.

May your heart, forever,
shout aloud
your presence
into a waiting world
as all dreams
awake for you.

 

    ~r.



   Dec, 2007,
    R. Braley
(astralshepherd)

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Happy 30th Birthday Jessi...you are loved.

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  • jjbreunig3
    August 14, 2008
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    An enjoyable piece...

    An enjoyable piece; really connected with the opening two stanzas; wonderfully done. --Joe


  • Nishantshah2381
    January 14, 2008
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    May your heart, forever,
    shout aloud
    your presence
    into a waiting world
    as all dreams
    awake for you.


    very subtle thoughts and erudite writing