Please.
I promise I wont.
Not Again.
I know you worry.
But I won't.
I just want to feel my arms wrap around you.
Yours wrapping around me.
My head on your shoulder listeaning to your soft breathing.
So close.
I want to whisper it in your ear.
But I only said I wanted a hug.
Plus, I promised I wouldn't kill you.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired - Pick a number by Naridill.
600 points, ended December 30, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very descriptive from picture not drawn from below. But a nice 'prose' type feel to it, adds a unique flow and really scribes well.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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Thanks for reading!
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thats really good...
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it's ok thanks for reading!
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