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Day of Destiny (Part V)

Amongst the rising flames, with sword at the ready

 

I stand tense toward the behemoth that lies before thee

 

A massive array of crimson scales; it fierce gaze quite steady

 

As we prepare to duel in a searing sea

 

Of flame that scorched all hither and yon

 

A swift strike of thy assailant prompts me to parry

 

Praised be the Gods of evasion; certain demise is gone

 

And yet the beast struck again, hoping to incinerate its quarry

 

Ever alert I gracefully evade

 

But scorched I am by the relentless heat

 

Pain ensued as I stumbled onto a ashen glade

 

With the tenacity of the beast t'was quite futile to retreat

 

Haste be with thee, for I am wont to strike

 

Lest I perish anon with an tarnished hide

 

In such battles I may align with the common

 

But as a warrior, such undermines my pride

 

 

 

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  • Tenshi Asakura
    December 14, 2007

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    the description of the behemoth was dead on, perfect! "Praised be the Gods of evasion" great line. the fact every attack is implied makes the battle even more epic and grand. ooh what happens? does he win?! the last four lines were awesome, i think i'm going to be quoting that awhile.