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Missed the Chance

day fades into
night
the time is near
your end will
come
the footsteps
behind you grow
close
your heart races
your muscles
tense
slowly a bead
of sweat drops
form your
brow
every noise no
matter how
minuscule
startles you
making you lose
all of your
nerve
suddenly the
all too familiar
footsteps
stop, you stare
into the unknowing
darkness
is someone there
you thought
this only
happened
in the
movies
a hand covers
your face
a strange
voice
whispers soft
threats in your
ear
tears stream
down your face
as your shoulders
shake
while you sob
silently
you tell yourself
this is the
last time you'll
walk in the
shadows
if you survive
the masked man
drags you away
from society
as you
hear
the knife leaving
the sheath
you wish you
would've
told your love
how you feel

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  • mesmerize me
    December 13, 2007

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    i didnt even read all of this, your breaks were incoherrant, it hurt my eyes to try to read it. try making the breaks a bit more understandable.

    But thanks for entering my contes, like i said just edit this so i can understand it. thankies