The melting sensation
on her lips tempted her
to caress the man...
The warmth of his thighs
against her body
brought her to new heights;
new limits... new arousals
Ice dripped along her stomach
causing shrieks of joy,
pleasure, ecstasy;
fiery passion consumed her as she was
burning with hot emotions
She caressed his body;
learning the ways to seduce him
to cause him to gasp... moan his need
and moved to the heated rhythm
of his arousal...
giving her shivers of delight
In swift impromptu motion,
they were swept into an eternal state
of euphoria... consumed by passionate delights
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensual Writes Only (Adult only) by Riftkin.
750 points, ended December 16, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Touch me with your words. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
525 points, ended September 2, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful poem. Filled with such love and intense passion. You truly paint a picture within the mind with this one. I love it.
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You define passion with warmth and sensuality..You took this write to a level of definition lacking in other exotic writes..You have elevated the conviction to amplify the feelings and emotions necessary to project true intentions in this type of poem..You nailed it..Congrats...Take a bow..You deserve to..Smile..you earned it.I loved this
John
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Lovely, this is sensual in a very soft loving way. There is no detail as of what it going on, yet it leaves the idea of what it could be to the reader. Sometimes this is more fun. Well done, thank you for the entry.
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Excellent
Oh my this was sensual and them some. Congratulations on your honorable mention.
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this is very good.. thank you for entering in my contest...
best of luck...
love behind bars28
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Very well done and so sensual without a single trace of words that could invite anything but envy for that feeling. Tastefully done
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nice poem here thank you for entering my contest Best wishes here. Riftkin
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The way you take a bunch of words and turn them into something beautiful.. mmmmmmmm
And that was beautiful.
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There is a playfulness here that is to be celebrated. Passion is not all intense madness but a full panopoly of arousal and sensations cascading across the framework of each individuals physical self. You have caught both the arousal and lust for completion with the sense of joy and curiosity that plays into it it as well. Very nicely done.
Love, Tom B.
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Perfect Title to how this poem feels....it really is a seductive and beautiful poem...
It feels amazing, and there is no doubt you will do very well in the contest
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!!
Is that legal
Geeeeeeeeeeeeesh~~
what a piece to arouse the senses and jumpstart the muse with a smile
Love it!!
Thank You for sharing Your Hotness
Best wishes to You in the contest Beautiful!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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