Christmas Greeting everyone
Christmas cheers and fun.
Rock around the christmas tree
Presents here for you and me.
Christmas dinner is delightful
But the pudding is just frightful.
Christmas decorations sparkle
Holly, Tinsel what a marvel
But the most immportant thing of all
Is not the presents and the toys
Not the trains or a bouncy ball
Is that Jesus love all girls and boys
Author notes
option 1
A contest entry
- ccc: Cool Christmas Contest!!!! Kids 15 and under!!!! by longlife.
4500 points, ended December 25, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So nice! what a beautiful poem you have shared with me!!!! Im glad you shared the TRUE meaning of Christmas!!!!!!!!!!! 
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A very good write. Heartfelt. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good descriptives. Nice rhythm. Good word choice and alliteration. Festive. Good closing line. Well penned and much enjoyed.
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wow christmas poemD: i adore christmas as well ur write
is so sweeeeet and rhymes perfect
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This is really cool! I like it. Christmas is awesome! I love it. Great work! keep it up! best of luck in the contest!!!
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A very happy rhyme, and a great and so appropriate little Christmas verse. Such a true message!
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So true indeed
Yes we can shop till we drop but if we dont give thanks for all our blessings then Its not a gift at all for without the love love is not returned
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