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I want to

I want to hold you close to me
I want to kiss you
I want to hear you say I love you in my ear
I want to hear your heart beating
I want to never let you go
I want to hear your laugh
I want to watch you sleep
I want to watch you dream
Well it seems that all I want is you my love.

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  • Kabs
    December 14, 2007
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    That last line really wrapped up the poem with emphesis, well done.