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If Not, More

You make me so incredibly happy.
Nothing could take me down
so long as I have you to stand there and say,
"Smile, be happy."

You got exactly what you wanted for Christmas
I got exactly what I needed, period

Oh I love you
I love you with all that I am
I don't really deserve you
but I'm going to revel in this chance

You always express so clearly your feelings for me
You always hope that you make me as happy as I make you
And like I always say,
"If not,  more."

I can't place the words.
I can't explain this bliss.
It seems all too wonderful.
Too "wunderbar"

I love so much about you.
Though we've only just begun.
I hope this stays the way it is.
You make me so outstandingly happy.
I love you so much.
I hope you feel the same way...
If not, more.

I can sleep easier
with what sleep i by chance get

I am more confident
with myself and what I create

I feel safer
with you there to fight my dragons

I more accomplished
with what I've done

I feel more connected
with my heart and mind

I am happier
with life and I'm not lying to myself

It is just hard to believe that I have someone like you.
I do love you...
If not, more

Author notes

i am so happy and im not lying to myself. oh my goodness, there isnt enough time or words to describe how happy and lucky i am...and how amazing he is. He is just Josh.

for the contest~ i just did my own thing

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 15, 2008

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    Keep hold of them, they are special for telling you these precious things, it's what we need to hear when we are very sad.


  • katie-jo
    January 11, 2008

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    I love this poem, especially the lovely used of wunderbar. I'm a German student in my second year, so it made me smile.
    Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest.

    kate-flamingo


  • Rock-Junkie
    December 20, 2007
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    now that Austin knows... guess I can feel like Im not holding onto this secret anymore. hehe
    I heard you told Austin that yall aint gonna be apart forever... but you told me that you dont want him. IM SO CURNFURZED! lol
    gonna go. byes

  • Rock-Junkie
    December 13, 2007
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    aawwww

    I know who this is about!!
    dear master, Im so glad you're happy. I hope it will stay this way!! ..If not, more..
    Mr. "A" wasnt in the room at the time that you wrote this I hope..?? cause he said he went to hang out with you during 3rd.
    well I have to go now!
    and I will obey you, master. and not tell a soul!
    ♥ Always