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Reluctant Restraint

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I do not touch you
but pass by like small cloud
brushing your skin
with such restraint:
capable of thunderbolts.





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prompt: Beautiful restraints

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  • tomisb
    December 14, 2007
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    sometimes we know we are a presence to be sensed more than seen.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Riftkin gold member
    December 13, 2007

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    such restraints on ones feelings is hard
    to wish and want without touching

    nice take for this


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 13, 2007
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    excellent take of the prompt good luck with it dear


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 13, 2007
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    expresses much...
    I like


  • Naridill
    December 13, 2007

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    Beautifully crafted, the words really go beyond what they are pressing towards. A sad but genuinely honest emotional level. Goodluck in contest.

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