Tell me a secret-
Now one more-
I want to know your deepest
Fears-
Tell me
A secret-
This Christmas Eve-
I want to be surprised
By all your secrets-
That's all I want-
A measly secret!
Then why is it
So hard to talk to you?
So hard,
So hard,
But I'm telling you now-
All I want for Christmas
Is
A
Secret.
Author notes
Did you like it? This is my first Christmas poem ever(I think) and I hope it's a good one!!!
A contest entry
- Tell Me Your Christmas Wish List! by Princess Peach.
420 points, ended December 23, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique- I can take truthful comments...
Comments
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Vi, this one is great! I couldn't believe my eyes when I read your were 11!! You are not like all the people, who want material stuff, wanting to know a secret for Christmas says a lot 'bout yourself! You are a trustful person, and you are also friendly enough to share a secret with someone. Also, you made me like free-verse, which means something!! Very good, Vivienne!! Have a Merry Christmas!
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I hope you get your secret wish for Christmas!
Blessings and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
Very good, I get that the person wants to know a secret for Christmas. No offense but at first I didn't get it and had to read more until I understood it. Good luck + thanks for entering!
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Good
it is a good poem !!!
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