A smooth wind chills you.
Your face
is a moonlit marvel.
I slide...
and glide...
down
to kiss salty skin
in a long embrace
with my lips,
feverishly hot for you.
A contest entry
- I Wanna Touch You All Over and Over and Over by Blooming Poet.
310 points, ended February 21, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Erotic Challenge Season 6 by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LETS MAKE A DOUBLE GOLD WINNER FROM YOUR GOLD WINNING POEM by Swan song.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Wow! I had better take my vitimins before I read hot stuff like this!!!!
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I agree with Ktulu. I think you could do well. I liked the sensuality of this. I also love that it is short and packed with power in its brevity. Well done.
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I loved the shortness to this. Though I have to agree that the second usage of "...." was unnesessary, I do not feel that this has interupted the flow for me.
I think you could do well in the challenge.
in my eyes you are a finalist.
**Master Ktulu** -
the second use of '...' wasn't really necessary (in my view) - it almost broke the flow of the write, but note, I said 'ALMOST'
short write that has left me thinking that perhaps you could do either sensual or hardcore ... nicely done - thank you
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Excellent
A lot of sensuality in a minimum of words!
WellDone and congratulations on the Gold!
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Thanks! I never won a contest before!!!!! I am soooooooo happy! Yay!
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Thank you for the lovely entry. You are giiving me the hots from this poem.
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LOVED IT!
THAT WAS VERY SWEET, GREAT JOB. -
awesome
wow very deep and strong, passion went into this poem. i like it.
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i really like this good job
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Dude, that was so awesome. hot!!!
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