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One good thing

can't dig myself
out of this one

    snowed under again
    covered in deep

no end in sight
candles going

  flickering fire sheds heat

  and you

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  • Cat
    December 14, 2007
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    funny- this started out with a very metaphorical feeling to it..
    the snowed under
    can'd dig myself out

    but then you segued into a very literal interpretation of the theme instead- i was surprised by that.

    thanks so much for entering the contest

    m