Your smile sickens me
Your eyes make me cry
You pretend that you are human
Yet I know It's One Big lie
Humans Don't do the things you do
we dont inflict this sort of pain
You look at me with lust in your eyes
my gaze is full of distain
I used to want to pry my way
into that pit you call a heart
and when i felt your eyes on me
it tore my soul apart
but now i'm running from you
and the beauty you hold inside
yet your ugly words are treasured
it's another thing you can't hide.
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A contest entry
- the continuing war between love and hate by Cerbie20.
680 points, ended May 10, 2008, 19 entries
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Well babe I hope you never feel that way about me?
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love the rhyming... it went with the flow, and it didnt sound forced.... so it made it all worth the while to read. i really liked these stanzas the most:
Your smile sickens me
Your eyes make me cry
You pretend that you are human
Yet I know It's One Big lie
I used to want to pry my way
into that pit you call a heart
and when i felt your eyes on me
it tore my soul apart
awesome job! and the best of luck
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i like it
ure word are in good form i like it.....
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This poem is amazing
BRAVO
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