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Release

    Sitting on a chair               

       Hands on chin

          Blinking

             Elbows on lap                                           

The chair cushions less of my body

     The chair begins to cease existence

          Standing on unseen floor

               "At least I can stand."

               Beyond the distance

          Beyond sight

     Was the lighted glimmer

a shimmer a light

I run towards it

     Shoelaces untied

          And I fell and I bled

               How far is this goal

               Obstacles obstacles

          Taken away from reality

     Stripped of mind

Stripped of soul

I got up again

     I could barely breathe

          The tendons in my legs

               Are beginning to fail

               I don't understand

          Why I was taken away

     To such a hell-like place

Release me

 

 

 

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  • Feirce.Dino
    March 16, 2008
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    That Is Very Good Keeps It Up XD


  • BleedingDeep
    February 1, 2008

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    WOW!! This piece is magnificent! I loved the picture and the way you took your time and made the lettering ino a swerve....Very E.E Cummings if you don't mind me saying...our an outstanding poet.


    • MagicaI
      February 2, 2008
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      Oh so long have I ever witness a comment.. so long.. thanks.. you lightened up my.. well.. ending my night nicely.. thanks ^^