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Blizzard (Hay(na)ku)

All
day long
snow and snow

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Cat gold member
    December 13, 2007

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    this feels pretty blank to me-

    the last seemed to offer so much more metaphorically-
    but i do appreciate you joining the contest..
    m


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    December 13, 2007

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    Find the weariness of a winter storm in this outstanding haiku--so much said in so few words! Good luck in the contest!