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Confused

Gone from here,
Banned from there.
Left with more than the outside exposed,
And naked with out my clothes.
My insides ache,
And blood I must take,
For I was doomed by the sight
And tonight will be my first bite.
Lost in this place,
How can so much evil, bring a smile to my face?
They my love will change,
And I will see the correct range.
I guess this could be ok
And I think blood could help my day…
But I don’t want be a zombie!!!!

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exactly 15 lines!!!! pic inspired
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2381778

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  • crazziladi
    December 14, 2007
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    WOW nice job!!!!


  • Tattboyspet
    December 14, 2007

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    thank you for your entry - I have handed the judging over to Tattboy as I'm having a problem with this contest - all the entries are so good He will judge it soon