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cabin fever

ice thin panes
buttress my prison
and peering out
at the landscape
suddenly plagued by
virgin highlights of
snow, i mutter,
tasting morning breath.

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  • Cat
    December 13, 2007

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    it tends to bounce back.. argh..

    this is cute- a take i hadnt expected.. and a topic ive not seen in poetry.. nicely done

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