sometimes i goto the mall just to watch the people
you see to me a mall bench is like the worlds peep-hole
i there to see how people work, just to watch them interact
it seems like they always pull some new shit just when you think you got 'em tacked
of course it dont hurt that in the summer time these girls wear a lot of skin
and if i sit in one place i can take it all in
sometimes i'll even stop and see if i can make one grin
and if not, shit, i aint gonna take it personal.
from angelina to annie
i love all women but most of 'em just cant stand me
maybe its my hair or my clothes
or maybe she noticed that i was digging in my nose.
but back to the people, im trying to figure out the junkies, the pimps, and the sober cats
how they all fit together when this world is so packed
and how they all survive when they're all in such a hurry
i dont know man, sometimes i just worry
but at the end of the day i guess people are people
but i still love 'em
especially the women.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by Birgitte.
450 points, ended December 14, 2007, 60 entries
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hehe! this definitely put a smile on my face! I would suggest that you read this through, because there are a few errors here and there, and also you should start each sentence with capital + all I's should be in capital. Other than that, as I said, this made me smile. Good job!

