Lord lift my name to walk on high, Arise
Slow in the cabin of fixed wing craft, Heart
Fossilized by anticipation, Eyes
Fix on lady friend Tigi who smiles art.
Drawn into flight by artful smile, Wishing
She allow me to return the favor,
Present circumstance shall find her missing,
Only musing on sky left to savor.
I fell face first through open cabin door,
Flailing limbs wild as if about to drown,
Building velocity towards earthly floor,
Parachute slows freefalling coast to ground.
Warm embrace of lady who made me fly,
In more ways than one I fell from the sky.
CauseI'mFreeeee....Freefalling!
The AOFalcon
A contest entry
- Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting. I'll be honest, I'm not very spiritual, so maybe that's why I didn't enjoy as much as I could have.
I could however see all of the images in this. The emotion was also strong.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Wow!! I won't get into a plane, much less jump out of a flying one!! You are brave. Very well written. Keep on writing.
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