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You said that we both saw the world the same
And reached with open arms the day love came
But
Love was blessings and bliss to me
And something diff'rent to you, I see
The very same path we both had tread
To very different places now has led
But, I love you true
So I do
Forgive you for the tears my heart has bled
You said you wanted me to come to you
The hardest thing that I would ever do
But
When I dropped all defenses bare
I came to you, but you were not there
I thought I'd found a love to call my own
Yet, all night I am waiting here alone
But, I love you true
So I do
Accept the fault as mine, and will attone
You said that you would open up the door
And I should only wait a little more
But
When I came to be by your side
You left the threshold to run and hide
I stand here with my insides growing numb
Heart fighting so to fear I won't succumb
But, I love you true
So I do
Wait wond'ring if my kiss will ever come
Author notes
Just indulging in thoughts
In a list
A contest entry
- Unreachable Hearts [added more options!] by TheSmileInHerEyes.
380 points, ended December 27, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell of victories over demons!
Comments
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For my personal preferences, this was a bit too....blatant? Not sure how to describe it-- I'm a fan of fancier terms, and metaphors and imagery, comparisons, etc. But nonetheless a good piece. Thanks for the Entry! ~Amanda~
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Where are the demons... Aha! They are gone. Thanks to you! And the crowd goes wild!
A crowd of bunnies that is!
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sing it for me...?
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OK.
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This is great! I sang it and it works! Your pen is on fire lately, I love it!
Love,
Amera♥
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