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Music As A Soul-Saver


In the place
Where the tears won't flow
With the silent screams
Where the pain can't show
"There's a room
Where the light won't find you
Holding hands while
The walls come tumbling down"

On my face
No emotion shows
No expression sits
Not a feeling flows
"And all the love

In the world won't stop

The rain from falling

Waste seeping underground"

Author notes

12. “Soon you'll forget but i just can't
I remember
I remember everything
All the times when no one ever came to get me
All the nights when i was scared
And when it got too weird
It was the song that saved me” – Songs That Saved My Life

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Also: Both quotes were taken from songs by Tears For Fears

Quote 1: Tears For Fears, "Everybody Wants To Rule The World"

Quote 2: Tears For Fears, "Break It Down Again"

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Comments


  • shadowlyn infinitas
    December 24, 2007
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    a short poem, but it still manages to convey strong feelings. emptiness fills your poem, i suppose. not emptiness as though your write is shallow, but rather that in such a place for such a person, there is nothing but empty space. thanks for your entry and best wishes for your future writing

  • punkedsway
    December 15, 2007
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    that is really nea