My heart is like the frozen snow
cold and lonely with no one to know
Longing for the gentle warmth of touch
of love that its needing so much
Crying out from all the pain
not knowing if it'll love again
For it's been sheltered deep in the cold cold woods
alone in the dark is where it stood
With many people passing by
silently hiding without a sigh
Screaming out to be found, but no one hears
for my heart is frozen in silence and tears
Maybe someday this snow will pass
and my heart will find love that will forever last
But until that day comes, when I don't know
my heart will remain frozen like the snow......
A contest entry
- December New Members Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended January 5, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I like the personal side in this poem. I think the rhyme scheme is a little simplistic, however it does help the flow of the poem. -
Welcome to Allpoetry
wonderful take on the prompt, good attempt. Thanks for taking part in the contest and here's wishing you happiness in the new year on behalf of the Greeters team at Allpoetry. -
Welcome to AllPoetry
Such a sadly beautiful piece, I am not one for rhyme but you have pulled this off so well, goodluck in the contest
Karen -
welcome to allpoetry
You did a very nice job relating the pictures and snow to your thoughts. I hope you will continue writing and sharing your words here with us all. Best of luck in the contest.
~Kristy -
Welcome to AP
Awww what a truly poignant piece this is!
So full of emotion and deep longing...
Thank you for sharing! I wish you the best in this contest and welcome to all poetry! -
WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
Very sad piece. You had some great flow in this piece. It was quite easy to really get into. Welcome and I wish you luck.
Despair
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This poem really speaks to me
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