Poetic thoughts
clouded with rules
freedom of expression
tossed to the winds.
Thespian words
expressing minstrel emotion
coffee stained keyboard
to ease frustration.
Words flowing in harmony,
submit to publish
when time-out request
displays on screen.
All thought now disjointed
sparse is the muse
as fervour dissipates
from technological confusion.
Author notes
Prompt - Scattered
A contest entry
- Prompt:: Scattered by Naridill.
450 points, ended December 22, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sounds like me and my computer a lot of the time... we just do not get on well at all.... wonderful take on the prompt hun
Karen
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'sparse is the muse'
Love that ~ creates such a different reflection of the poem - with just that quote/phrase alone. Beautifully done.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck
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Well penned!
My frustration lately is a mouse...that freezes the computer! UGH! Best wishes in the contest.
*PEACE ON EARTH*
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Wonderful poem that is thought-provoking and follows the prompt excellently! Good luck in the contest!
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