TORN
Dear lord please listen
I can not feel more torn,
Right now.
She's my whole world.
I love her endlessly,
I hold back because of that.
But this feeling, torn so strongly
Makes me feel like breaking point
Is upon me.
Please tell me What I do now?, I beg
I can't answer this one for myself.
The love I hold for her makes me say "no
Stop and think, don't!"
But there are two people hurting.
Yes, I may care about one
More than the other.
But I also have a heart,
That hears the pains they both speak of.
It can't completely switch off
for either of them.
Sometimes I wish it was that easy.
I am so confused
Lost in it all
So torn!!..
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Hmm... an interesting look at it. I'm slightly confused on who the two people are but it sounds somewhat like something with me, so I can relate without really even knowing. Anyway, thanks for adding this to my contest and best of luck.
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Thank you :0
It is something I wrote about my sister and her ex, he left her when she was in early stages of pregnancy. But I couldnu understand it somewhat as he is only young.
They arent together, they have a daughter Madalynn 6 weeks old now, and are both great parents
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When you write from the heart all sorts of feelings and emotions flow out. This is sincerely and honestly written, Precious one. Best wishes in the contest.
Always,
Mum
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Thanks Mum
Cin
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A heart torn between love and hurts inflicted by one we hold dear. this is the phase that encountered from moment to moment in every day life. So poignant and to the point Cindy..wish God send his guidance
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Thank you, this is something I had written a while back and not posted on here yet, that tis again about my sister and the pain she was experiencing with her fiance leaving her when she was in the early stages of her pregnancy.
I am glad you connected with this one and God bless you too my friend
Cin
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