entrails tied me to the chair,
laughing insidiously,
begging to end this misery fair
scraping the walls of my heart,
carelessly feasting,
jaded by love and ripped apart
watching me cry,
made her tear out her eyes,
and dance in a gloomorious rage
licking her bloody lips,
and shaking those demonous hips,
made me think of the more glorious day's
Heartless bitch
A contest entry
- 'Banished' - Dark Pic Inspired by Tattboyspet.
300 points, ended December 15, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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wow sounds like someone I once knew, best of luck in contest
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...wow...
That's a scary picture. But a great poem. Though the "licking her bloody lips" was scary too.
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well yuck you painted the picture well but yuck
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Vicious..simply vicious. The image is very intimidating and the poem captured itself very well.
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OUCH...didn't know you knew me so well
excellent poem! Very vivid imagery, and startling prompt...must of been a pix from one of my better days best to you in the contest ~blessings always~
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thank you for your entry - I have handed the judging over to Tattboy as I'm having a problem with this contest - all the entries are so good
He will judge it soon 
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oooooo i get it..... ur poem was inspired by the pic.. lol i guess i shud pay more attention
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dayum!
omgoodness thats fantasmicly wondertatious .... i hope this wasnt taken from a real life experience well neway i thought it was great
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I seriously had no idea that I would get such fantastic entries for this picture - well done - thank you!
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