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Six Feet Of Love


Eviscerated smiles crawl over vertebrae,
while rotten tongues hiss sweet nothings
to the backs of same and different.

Pungent perfume scents sickly air,
and giving flesh holds supple skin
in tender deathly embrace.

Rings of true “forever”
romanticize feral teeth in cracking lips,
‘til touching bone he screams.

Author notes

Ok so basically I was given a challenge by my older brother. He wanted me to write a poem on Gay Zombie Love/Sex. This is the (amusing) end product.

Honesty would be lovely

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  • Dlvvanzor
    April 28, 2008

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    Also, I'm willing to bet this is the only poem catigorized as Gay Zombie Love.

  • Dlvvanzor
    April 28, 2008
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    Lol, that's definately strange. ^_^ But well written. Great job!

    -Dlvvanzor


  • monstruo
    February 17, 2008

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    One of the top ten most unlikely poem topics, right below the eternal beauty of Hillary Clinton. So off beat(more than a little sickening, when taken in context), yet strangely enough, it made me laugh.


    • Exodus gold member
      February 17, 2008
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      Good to know it wasn't just me that found this amusing.
      I was laughing the entire time I wrote it


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 6, 2008
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    Wow,seems to me you have clearly won the challenge...a very sickly and disturbing write...


  • Tattboyspet
    December 13, 2007

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    DAMN GIRL!!!!! You not only nailed the challenge by your older brother but impressed the hell out of me, that's for sure!!!
    EXCELLENT JOB!
    Definitely deserving of 3 claps - WELL-BLOODY-DONE!!!!


    • Exodus gold member
      December 13, 2007

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      I thought you might enjoy it.
      I had this one on paper for a while, but thought it would be a good idea not to post it, then decided what the hell, and did
      They can deal, and I labelled it appropriately ^_^

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