He is
the soothing breath
of silence
before the birth of
dawn
infinite
potentiality of
vastness
carrying
the sparkling seeds
of life
within his formless
womb
His words
are sacred mantras
resonating
within the cathedral
of my immortal
heart
a gentle call
from home
the eternal place of
Presence
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I have not had the words of late to bring fitting tribute to this wondrous work. Your words for me have always been a "gentle call... from home" and your spirit and all that you ARE shine through!
May you and your Beloved have a most wondrous and special Holiday!!
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This comes close to being a description of God.
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"His words
are sacred mantras
resonating
within the cathedral
of my immortal
heart"
Leaving a lingering impression upon our universal soul!
You have painted the man behind the poet quite well.
Ovations!
Marianne
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Excellent tribute (and watercolor)! Good luck in the contest!
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thank you, dear maggie ... no contest though, except the eternal contest of life
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blessings to you,
marion
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Birth, womb, heart in gentle shade of blue...
This speaks to me of anima; the feminine inner self found within the male unconscious. You do have insight into those around you.
I'm sure he will be awed by this.
Blue
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He has chosen the right name for himself, hasn't he?
Your heart overflows with beautiful metaphors.
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