My heart sinks
my veins twist
then kink
I curl into ball
and cry
up against the wall
I try to gain control
but this awful pain
fills my soul
I try to to think
but tighter my veins
twist and kink
Attempt to blink back tears
but taken over
by terrible fears
I look around
slightly afraid
of what i found
A razor blade
with a fatal cut
my pain starts to fade
Then all i see is blood
my head hit the floor
with a loud thud
My thoughts drift away
and forever here
I'll always lay
On floor beside my bed
I'll never wake up
I'm dead
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Comments
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Nicelly done. Crept up on me, I too didn't see the end coming. I felt slow deep grundge music as I read it.
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wow
I did not see that ending coming. very emotional
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