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Rejection

Eyes shut

Stomach in knots

Regret will never cease

your eyes created meaning

To the tedious routine

Your smile gave me hope

That better things were on the brink

If things were different

You'd be the first love

I'd ever truly believe

But always a last resort,

I'll remain

Pity the risk I took,

Not me

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This is the complexity of love

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  • star crossed
    December 17, 2007
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    rejection such a sad part of love, and a part so many are familiar with. very nice. good luck!