Once isolated, within my mind's view
No logical reasoning we both know
Embraced by loves loyalty you imbue
From a distance you healed me heart and soul
Seeking refuge inside my open wounds
Dreams meander throughout dusk's timeless zone
Few moments I've heard harmonious tunes
But caged within many thoughts of my own
Singing hushed melodies from whispered hymns
You color me in like portraits to paint
Elegant is your element within
Though I am considered no faithful saint
As you've ignited this eternal flame
My baby, my faith in you will remain
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I'm gonna share your poems today okaayy..
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Excellent
Such deeply moving and touching thoughts. Beautifully expressed. -
What strong words of love and faith. I love your back ground so very much. One can feel the love that come out of your work.
As you've ignited this eternal flame
My baby, my faith in you will remain
In a world of little faith you shine out with your faith in God and love. Great read. Thanks for stopping by and reading me it made my day. I shall be smiling. Thank you sending my sisterly love to you. Hope you had a great holiday season. -
A heart of love show strong here and you bare your heart for all to see...So much love and beauty held within the chamber that lives within your soul...
Blessings
~~Cheryl~~
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Fragile power reflected in vulnerable strength, values that will survive anything else. You are who you were destined to be through hardship and temptations, the essence remains. The wonder of it is expressed in a moving way in these soothing words. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care, Tim
Chris
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BREATH TAKING
AWE! such beautiful words of love and tenderness flowing from this Masters pen...Reaches in and pulls a soft sigh from the heart...sighs...Niaish my Pet for sharing and just being you
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Beautiful!
A lovely piece you have shared here Daddio~
You know I enjoy all your soul weaves.
Thanks for being the best!
Your son, Tim Jr. aka poeticpieces
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wow
hey long time but i'm back.. its love amazing... ur poem is good.. love the emotion in it.. i hope she loves u like u love her....
My baby, my faith in you will remain
Seeking refuge inside my open wounds
Dreams meander throughout dusk's timeless zone
Few moments I've heard harmonious tunes
But caged within many thoughts of my own
i liked those lines..!
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It is not hard to love you. Many on here do. The poem is beautiful as all your writings are.
Smile,
Judy
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Absolutely a wonderful and beautiful piece of poetry, sweetie
Sigh...
This just makes you feel good all over while reading
Love is a awesome thing; happy that you found your "keeper"
All the best!
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Love is awesome,the emotions soothe the soul, great poem to your love,good luck as I truly don't think you need it...lolbe well sweet friend...MM
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This is beautiful, breathtaking and such a wonderful poem of love and devotion! You are amazing and I am so glad that you have someone who knows that!
I appreciate ya Bro!
I know she just adores this
Lynda
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awww...Tim, this is so beautiful, I always feel such a genuine sincerity in your words...your voice is such a sweet soul..
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Excellent
What a powerful heart wrenching creation about love. Another well woven creation.
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