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the phenomenal bass

The bass
the space,
the succession of lines.

The Clef of F, of the leftwards mind.

The music of the cognitive, intelligence's call.

Meticulous as always, compressing and flowing downwind;

the sharps do lower with baritone praise,

the tenor fortissimo

of

Cristofori's age.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    December 13, 2007

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    I wish I knew what piece of music was in your mind when you wrote this. Not harpsichord, no real bass, no baritone. Even so, the writing plays. You have been very busy.