The purity and innocense of an angelic soul is
Free to feel love in a touch and trust in another
She is born of elegance and grace, with the face of My sister,
My daughter, My mother... of nature
In all her delicate beauty.
Who does dare to taint such a Godly gift?
The evil of rightousness
The simple minds of the sinister
The careless and calloused of those good God fearing men.
Stains on her bloodied soul have not been
Bleached of your sin.
Your Hail Mary's and prayers for forgiveness have not
Released her of your shadows, following her through her dreams.
Screaming echoes within the hearts of all Angels as
You bed down with devils while you mock
All that is pure with your toxic touch and your venomous lies.
Stealing from God does not go unoticed!
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Oh Dear Justice still you are deaf and mute
Hang your head in shame as you preach of your
precious oath.
To bury your brothers sin is to feed his evil
You have brought disgrace upon Your sisters,
Your daughers, Your mothers....
You are poison to your people
Lacking what you claim as your essence
While the beloved daughters of fathers are violated
In your house.
Corruption does not go unoticed by God,
Do you hear Angelic screams when you close your eyes?
Author notes
The first half (above the *****) is to the rapists the second is to the Justice system.
Please let me know who to send the letters to?
I have a bunch of girls and women who are interested in writing a letter asking why these crimes go unpunished/unoticed.
The line re: daughters being violated in Justices house is meant as; the White claimed to know how to run this land in a 'civilized' manner and in the name of it's laws, it's justice these 'savage' crimes go without notice.
A contest entry
- Poems against rape and murder of Native American women by ecrivain01.
4100 points, ended December 23, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW... you have totally amazed me with this write. It is so strong and worded in such a wonderful way. I am in awe of your talent Nicole...
Exceptional !!!
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Thanx so much for your kindness...
You are a great friend and an awesome poet as well.
Comments such as this from poets such as yourself are very flattering.
Hope your Holidays are spectacular!
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Please send the poem ...
and your letters to your Congressman and both of your Senators in whatever state you live in. You could also contact your local TV and radio stations and ask them why nothing is being done to publicize this horrific situation. After all, Amnesty International has published a study on this which gives the facts and figures in plain print for all the world to see.
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You have penned a very powerful write with your words. Amazing imagery!! My favorite lines were...
Who does dare to taint such a Godly gift?
The evil of rightousness
The simple minds of the sinister
The careless and calloused of those good God fearing men.
Thanks for sharing with us. take care, Sandy
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Oh that last line of part one: Stealing from God does not go unoticed!
yes, to be sure.... once the stun of it all is voer...then the plan for recompense.
and then, again, the last line of part two:
Do you hear Angelic screams when you close your eyes?
such sounds must ripple, as all thigns do, in the Universe...who has heard, we can not be sure...what is thought and planned, god helpus all.
Oh quickly forgivness/forgiveness
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Thank you for your comment and for the correction, I always appreciate when someone points out a type o or other mistakes.
It's still about learning for me.
I am happy you like what I wrote I wasn't sure if it would be okay with the two parts but I was having a hard time with staying on one subject LOL.
The whole thing is infuriating and since two entries were not an option I was hoping that two parts of one would be.
Thanks again and God Bless
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Well done, your poem speaks loudly and strong against injustice, you have as allways done an excellent job, your amaze me evertime I read one of your poems, blessings with love John
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Oh John I always so look forward to your comments. I always know that I can count on you to read what I put down LOL...
Thank you and with Much Love,
Nicole
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POWERFUL
And very sad, touching in that you bravely speak out against this injustice while others have been known by example to look the other way. I am so impressed!
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Thank you so much.
I can not understand how any human being can afford to look the other way while another is being or has been hurt.
I believe by doing nothing one is commiting as nasty of a sin against that person and the community as the one who actually did the actual crime.
Crimes against humanity means a crime commited against us all and the power hungry cowardice police, prosecuters, judges, and their apologists will one day be forced to face their sins and to repeat their lessons.
(Sorry kind of touchy subject for me, lol)
God Bless~
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