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Cinnamon Kisses



I lay in bed,

Where our love was said,

I close my eyes

You are here.



Tender embrace

A stripping race

I need to have you



Fingers entertwined

I kissed your collar bone and you sighed

I can hear you



My olive goddess, watch how she dances

My beauty, watch how she prances

I can see you



Sweet sweat drops off of your skin

Leaving small traces of our unbidden sin

I can smell you



Cinnamon lipgloss, tainting your lips

Giving you a cinnamon kiss

I can taste you



Dreams of us, Dreams of being

Dreams of freedom, Dreams of beaming

I can almost feel you



I open my eyes,

I look at our bed.

You are gone.

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  • OurxBeginning
    December 13, 2007
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    Sorry but this isn't what we're looking for. Thanks for entering nonetheless.


  • catherinevania
    December 12, 2007
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    oh my...
    this is a very beautiful piece.
    i specifically liked this verse:

    "Cinnamon lipgloss, tainting your lips

    Giving you a cinnamon kiss

    I can taste you"

    the imagery is just fantastic.

    it felt like i was there.
    Blessed be...