I know they can't look
with eyes that can see
I've heard you say you're ugly
But how can that be?
For when I first saw you
when I first saw your face
I saw that you were golden
and I knew I'd want a taste
And when your eyes had come to life
when your spring had come
i saw the green creep bashfully
into the rising sun
A contest entry
- What's the Sweetist Thing Anyone Has Ever Done For You Love? by Immortalbeauty.
1000 points, ended August 7, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like. great flow and well done with the metaphor dept. Not sure what the god Dionysus looks like, have to google now.
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I love it so far
Keep up the good work and I will check back
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