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Dear Loved One

When I look deep inside of you
What do I see
Do I see a person who's strong, sophisticated, and so happy to be with me
Yes, but it's covered up with the drugs within you
It's hard to see what kind of person you are
I just pray that you will listen to me
Dear loved one, why can't you just say no
Just put it down and let it go
Dear loved one, this may be the last letter you ever read
Please, just say no for me

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  • Atrium
    January 16, 2008
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    Such feeling

    all thoughts put together in one collective motion...