The road we walk, the path we take
All may end in one big mistake
But none of us will know
How far we can go
If we all quit now
And just back down
So stick to the path set for you
And see just what you can do
Stay on the road no matter how dark
And just remember to stay true to your heart
Author notes
Inspired by this quote:
"Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens."--J.R.R. Tolkien
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Comments
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what a lovely rhyming poem.
i thought the quote by J.R.R. Tolkien was very wise, and you managed to revolve around that sentence quite well.
thanks for this entry
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beautiful loved this sooooo much thx for entering.
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your* heart =p
this is really good!
inspirational.
sensational
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well thank you thank you very much...and yes I fixed the mistake!
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