Five lines hold me in my entirety.
With my own time and key signature,
I find my own melody in time.
Notes correspond on a page,
slowly louder and softer.
Chords are people, dancing
Slowly.
Softly.
Beautiful.
Harmony with Melody,
your hands in mine.
Finally music that flows in time.
Short.
Sweet.
To the Point.
That's what I love about your rhythm.
This music is contagious.
The balance the blend.
Rummage for answers in the measures.
Melody so sweet, harmony so real.
This is what music must feel.
A contest entry
- Metaphor Me by AnotherFace.
700 points, ended December 24, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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For some reason this reminds me of an India Arie song "always in my head" where she personifies music.
Newayz i like this poem, the words you have used completely strengthen the metaphor and the whole theme of the poem. I especially like "Melody so sweet, harmony so real, this is what music must feel".
well done. However, you may want to spellcheck. A few typo's like entirity should be entirety and you're should be your.
I love music, i love this poem. -
This was a very sweet poem. I loved the tone it held. The only thing I found was an extra "e" in rhythm. Other than that. Great job!
Thanks for entering =] -
nice!!! this is soooo sweet... awww BooBoo has a soft spot...lol
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