There are many meanings of love that people share and have.
But mine is a very special kind of love.
That I can only show any girl that dates me and i will show them my meaning of love.
Please tell me what you think
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what's your meaning of love?
what's your meaning of love for me? cause if there is love here, then i don't feel it. -
I wish you'd delved deeper into the idea, as this is flat and you didn't even bother to elaborate -- or even define -- your meaning of love. Sure, it's a tough thing to articulate in any form, whether it's a poem or simple statement, but you could have tried. Poetic devices like imagery and metaphor, and also strong diction, can help your work be more effective and less bland. Simply telling people that your kind of love is special doesn't do anything for a reader. If you want your readers to relate to this, there's nothing concrete to actually relate to, you know?
If this is meant to be prose, your sentence structure is really elementary and, honestly, I'd expect this kind of work from a seven-year-old. With some effort, this could be good, but what you have is a mediocre foundation. Keep writing; you'll improve.
-Cristina -
"my meaning of love"
Calls for an encore of a deeper poem with more defenition!
Mylee -
WOW
i like this it's cute i like it a lot!!!! -
Itis really touching and good
this poemtouches the very bottom of my heart
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