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forgotten suicide

Blood runs through these veins
Causing me so much pain
Keeping me alive, eh whats the point
I am dying anyway as you smoke your last joint.
Have you forgotten your promise?
The feel of that sweet kiss.
Well as I lay dying I know
Its time to let you go.
Forgive me I couldnt live on with thhis regret.
So in death i'll pay the debt.

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  • I will stand by you
    January 10, 2008
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    Jessica Lynn May this is a great write but if you ever feel that way you call me, understand?


  • AloneWolfie
    December 15, 2007
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    DON'T YOU DARE!!!!!!!!!! I'm being serious jess. don't you even think bout it....