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Faith

Faith Is all I have,
Praying and hoping Ill be OK
hoping I’ll be able
to live to see another day
to see another sunrise and sunset
every night I’m scared
I'll never wake up the next morning
everyday I’m scared
I'll never be able to see my family
or my friends again
I think that every breath
could be my last breath
that’s why I plan to do
everything I can while i can
before I’m called by god to have
my life judged on those great scales
faith is all I have left to keep me
breathing and I plan to in till I can't anymore

Author notes

this was written for my cousin whom had and sirvived kidney failure
she went through moire pain that i think i could have gone through and it reallys makes me look up to her

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  • named.disaster--x
    June 17, 2008

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    Wow

    Ryan,
    This is an amazing poem! I know it was your first one to post on your site but, this is a great write!And I sure hope your cousin is still okay...and I think she would make a great person to look up to.

    "that’s why I plan to do
    everything I can while i can
    before I’m called by god to have
    my life judged on those great scales
    faith is all I have left to keep me
    breathing and I plan to in till I can't anymore"

    This is my favotite part of what you penned down here. They seem determined and hopeful.

    Great Piece,

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