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Where Are You Taking Me?

Where are we going,
Where are you taking me?

On a wild ride
With I, the wind, you reply.

So, carry me on your back
And let me command you
Like a rider on a horse
I need no saddle.

Help me escape
I will feel the rush of my pulse in my ears
And the air between my thin fingers.

Wind, be my carriage
And let my soul
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Author notes

I AM LISE

I am a dandelion speaking to the winddd...okay it's not obvious but I just took the picture and ran with it.

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  • Dutch Doll
    January 21, 2008

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    this is very pretty, very serene, felt a lot at peace reading this, congrats on the trophey


  • RedPetals
    December 19, 2007
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    Loove It!!!!!!!!!


  • Bear Cub
    December 14, 2007
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    ooooo

    ic sorry bout that

    • riasme
      December 14, 2007
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      that's ok always happens when reserving spots for quickies

  • Bear Cub
    December 14, 2007
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    that was weird

    • riasme
      December 14, 2007
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      read the contest and all will become clear.

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