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What's Going On?? Between You And Me

What is going on with us?
I need to know.
Quiet nights I spent awake,
Wondering what are you doing,
Oh please let the phone ring.
Baby I can't keep wondering what it is we have going,
I need to know right here right now,
Are we over?
Or just beginning?
I've controlled myself,
I've been faithful,
But what I want to know is what is going on with us?
Whatever it may be you need to know,
My heart forever will be the same,
It was no joke when I would say baby I love you.
But now I need to know is it you and me,
Or do I stand alone.
I thought night and day,
About what is going on,
But I come up clueless not knowing.
Please tell me.
Give me a clue,
As of what's going on.
We broke up once before I admit I was crushed,
But if that is how it's suppose to be,
Then time will heal my broken heart.
If you read this please don't cry,
That was the last thing from my mind,
I'm am so confused,
I don't know what's going,
Between me and you.

 

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  • TroubleInMyMind
    November 12
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    I feel this

    This is written for me I'm sure.
    Why are some gals hard to read?
    They leave you messed up in the head ..


  • fallin 4u again
    October 22

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    i just wrote a poem similar to this the other day about me and my ex girlfriend...sadly we ended up breaking up and it was hard!!! but i really like this poem it ment alot to me when i read it


  • XxTattered WingsxX
    April 18, 2008

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    I seen that you got a reply on this from her. I'm sorry that you went through this. I know exactly how it feels. Laying in bed, watching the phone, praying it rings but dreading the voice that you will hear at the other end, your heart pounding in your head, drowning out the awkward silence. It is very easy to tell that this came from the very bottom of your heart. Although it is quite depressing, it is an amazing poem.


  • kooleyes
    March 14, 2008

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    Hey there hope she gives you an answer. Not good to sit and wait. hope all is well. great writing. hope to be back online soon. til then keep on writing my friend


  • sstanley890
    March 1, 2008

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    good poem sheba. She'll be a fool to let such a loving person like you go. All you need to do is become a hard person and tell her straight up that you love her, that wont change no matter what. it sounds like she needs to have someone to hold neways.... you'd be perfect.


    Sarah


  • Borntowriteforever
    December 13, 2007
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    i am sorry. its a very pretty yet depressing poem. i like it.


    • lesbian-in-love
      December 13, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it. It came straight from my heart as is the truth so that to me is what makes it effective.


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    December 13, 2007

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    I hope you are ok, and asorry we can empathise, emo-lauren is my ex and she wrote a poem about how sorry she is, but i dfon't care anymore. I'm too hurt. Talk any time xxxxxx

  • Nighttime angel
    December 12, 2007

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    this is a great poem that you have written. so full of emotions and straight from your heart. I have found at least with me, the more time that I have to think, sometimes it makes me feel worse. too much thinking I suppose. I found as I read this poem, I could relate to many of the same feelings.

    you can talk with me, if you want to.

    kat


    • lesbian-in-love
      December 13, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment. thinking does sometimes make it worse. i have been thinking about this way too much.


  • Darknessismylight
    December 12, 2007

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    baby i don't know i love you w/ all my heart i want to call you but i can't no phone for awhile i love you so much but i don't know either


    • lesbian-in-love
      December 13, 2007
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      babe that is the part where i am confused on. i love you too that won't change. i am just trying to figure this out that's all.

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