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Non-Religion

Divine, the clunky evanescence
of your embrace, even for me,
pulling the being to divinity.

Those that fall, as sinners plunge to hell,
divinity lifts them higher.

But from the “holy” man flies
(his words are no longer true)
The ignorant ramblings of the misguided.

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