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What if we didn't go anywhere
when we die,

and all that happens
is the dissolution of our soul,

Hisssssss

and all you heard before the end
was a simple

laugh, what laugh, whose laugh
you'll never know:

half-flown, you’ll wish for more
to happen, your soul to go onward,

then, taken by some force,

shaded lighter.

Will it be good, dying, the end

of a broken spell?

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Another one for my poetry class... I'm not sure if I'm proud of it or not.

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