Your lips look like they were made
For something else but they just suck my breath
I want your pain
To taste why you're ashamed
And I know you're not
just what you say to me
Your mouth paid off
Fuck me 'til we know it's unsafe
And we'll paint
Over the evidence
A contest entry
- parched lips by adsaige.
300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 13 entries
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judged
completely interesting. reminds me of two of my poems actually. regardless, i think the line " For something else but they just suck my breath" you should've made a new line after else just too keep the "length". thank you for entering and good luck.
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Your lips look like they were made
For something else but they just suck my breath
I want your pain
I love this. It really describes the moment.
<3
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