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Just One Hour

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Just One Hour

 

 

 

The party had been tedious, the same familiar faces

conversation stilted, of love there were no traces

 

He slipped in undetected, no-one saw but me

his glowing smile warmed my heart, set my senses free

 

He offered me a handshake, he said his name was Lance

we talked for quite a while then asked if I would dance

 

His touch electrified me, his arm around my waist

he pulled me tighter too him, this game he played with haste

 

His breath so warm upon my cheek, words spoken in my ear

resistance then seemed futile, “Let’s get out of here”

 

We drove to his apartment, he beguiled me with his charms

first sweet kiss upon my lips while held within his arms

 

As he lay me on the bed I only knew his name

and gave myself completely to play this sexual game

 

An hour of body contact entwined as lovers do

knowledge of each other,

from that first kiss,

just grew!

Author notes

The above poem was inspired by this option and quote

4. "You can discover more about a person in an hour of play than in a year of conversation." -- Plato.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    December 18, 2007
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    Great take on the quote..
    Sensual but tasteful...
    Beautifully done
    Ty for entering

    Lynda


  • nansie
    December 16, 2007
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    very true

    Much!much! more than a platonic frendship,
    A great write.


  • Quill
    December 13, 2007
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    Excellent write Sue,erotic stuff but not blatent,loved it

  • amysticwriter silver member
    December 13, 2007
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    Excellent

    One of your best Sue, good luck in the contest...mystery


  • Lily of the Valley
    December 12, 2007

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    I thought the best parties took place in the kitchen but it seems I've been deluded for many years lol. This is a lovely sensual write and I'm sure there are many people who would love to have experienced a conclusion like this at a boring party. Good luck in the contest


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    December 12, 2007

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    Very beautiful writing indeed Sue. I have got to say that the imagery in this one was outstanding. The piece was short but I could see everything that was going on. Wonderful writing here. I like the layout too. Well done Sue. Love and passion throughout this piece is very strong indeed.

    Much love and respect
    Wayne Leon
    xxx


  • Gigglegasm gold member
    December 12, 2007
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    Wow!


  • arafura gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    entwined...

    What an hour! You know how to bring everyone's fantasys to life... so silky and sensual! Good luck in the contest!


  • moonbumps silver member
    December 12, 2007

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    Hitting all the right buttons as usual Mrs.C...this must happen a lot you know,mind you,not that I know for sure!!! Very sensual but without the naughty bits.
    Good luck with this hot one.x

  • Bad Bill
    December 12, 2007

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    Nicely sensual, without being graphically explicit, and very well-rhymed. I enjoyed reading this.

    Bill

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