So its over
Yes it's over
He has said goodbye
I have spent many hours
trying not to cry
Yes it's over
He no longer is there
to rub his soft hands
through my hair
Yes it's over
for i didn't see it coming
o well don't fret
for there will be others
The sun will come up
again and again
the flowers will bloom
in the springtime again
Love will come again
for you and me
So hold your chin up high
And do not cry.
Author notes
Written October 30th, 2003
A contest entry
- October New Members- "Chin Up" Poetry Contest - Hosted by The AllPoetry Greeter Staff by CookieZeal.
300 points, ended November 3, 2003, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This was really inspirational. It's so awesome to see some good thoughts coming out of you.
that makes me happy. I loved this one. Keep up the awesome work!
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I like this, PrincessRZ, a very good write. It doesn't seem to follow the criteria for the poem, though. You can be proud of it anyway
Dee -
This is very hopeful and lovely.
However, remember to follow criteria so that your chances to win are better. (Read it again so you'll know what is missing!) You can do it.
Thank you for entering and welcome to AllPoetry. -
to have hope is it have faith ate least in your self
write on poete,
good luck in the contest
peae be with & blessed be;
shaggy wolf
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